Friday, August 8, 2014

What can We Do on the Weekends?

What can We Do on the Weekends?
  Most of the people either watch TV on their weekends, or play computer games at their undisturbed personal secret space to while away the weekends, even though they are not ''home geeks''.Therefore, what on earth occurred the phenomenon? Traced to its source, I think maybe it result from no hobbits or nothing appealing to them. Anyways, that's not the importance we'll talk about today. Let's focus on what can we do to pass the time meaningfully? There are some activities below I recommend:
  First, going for an outing will be your best choice. Personally, weekends are the time for us to bring about a relationship with our family members and friends in the hustle and bustle of the era. Hiking on the slope with trees lined besides the pavement, you'll learned how beautiful the world is, which you haven't noticed it before.
  If you are not favorable for nature, than you can try some activities indoors which is good for you. For instance, playing puzzles can improve your observation ability, doing math exercises may help you on logical problems or reading knowledgeable references can increase your erudition.
  To sum up, take good advantage of your weekends from now on, not jut sitting in front of your silent and dull machine, or being a couch potato for all day, you'll find out there're more interesting and fascinating things than that in your life.     

2 comments:

  1. imprortance 重要性
    which you haven't noticed it before. 這句若是在補充說明前面, it 會是多餘的~
    If you are not favorable for nature, than you can... 前面有if, 逗點後面than要去掉
    there're more interesting and fascinating things than that in your life.這句應該是說比起上述事項, 還有很多更有意義的事情。而句中的 interesting和fascinating應該都是要形容things的, 我會建議可改成 you'll find out there're more interesting, fascinating things than that in your life.
    =")
    By the way, what is "math exercises" in your essay? Is that kinds of math games, or training? Why it can help us on logical problems?
    I agree that going outing with friends or relations can help us keep good connections with each other~!

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    1. exercise可以解釋成習題的意思,所以在這裡是指數學作業

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