Most people weekend routine is watching
TV, playing online game or lying in bed all day long. What else can we do on
the weekend? For me, I prefer to learn something that I am interested in or
help my career. For instance, My English is not good so I have made up my mind to
enhance my English speaking and writing. I am trying to join the English group
and finding some people who have the same habit in improving English skills
each other. This is exactly what I am doing right now. If you are very keen on
music, such as jazz, pop music, and classic music, then going to the concert is
another great choice. Even you can take an instrument playing course. Playing a
musical instrument can bring joy to you and to everyone around you. On the
other hand, according to my experience that playing an instrument helped me deal
with depression and other emotional issues. So make a difference plan for your
weekend.
1.most people weekend routine要加's
ReplyDelete2.online game 為可屬名詞，要加an或s
3.on the weekend本週末/ on (the) weekends每週末
4.help 的主詞為something，要加s
5.even的位置要注意!!會改變句子的意思!!!
Even you can take an instrument playing course.甚至連你也可以去學樂器
但你應該是要表達「你甚至可以去學樂器」吧？→You can even take an instrument playing course.
6.倒數第二句不用that，因為that後面為完整子句
Thank you for your help.
DeleteWelcome to join us!!
ReplyDeletewho have the same habit in improving English skills "with" each other.加個with吧
ReplyDelete古典樂 classical music
I like jazz, pop music, and classical music however, I prefer listening than playing.
Welcome to join us!
1.For instance, "My English is not good" so........可以以更正面去形容這句話,這句話給人太沒自信。
ReplyDelete2.Playing a musical instrument can bring joy to you and to everyone around you.
=>Playing a musical instrument can bring joy to everyone around you.
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