On weekends, going out with my families is my favorite things to do. In July, I went to be a lecturer in a summer camp for age 6 to 12 every week days from eight to five. Spent all days with those funny kids, that was a very interesting things but also a very tired job to me. Especially when the climate was hot and wet, those kids would become much crazier than usual.
After working on weekdays, I always felt tired out. However the exciting activities were waiting for me, because I could have a bid dinner with my families when I off work on Friday. On weekends, mom usually invites us to go out-door, like hiking in the mountains, traveling to hot spots in other cities, shopping in the depantmentstore, watching movies, attaining exhabitions in the museum, and so on. Usually after the nice activities on weekend, I would have enough energy and spirit to start a new week working. That's why I love going out with my families on weekend very much.
1.on the weekend:本週末 \ on (the) weekends:每週末
ReplyDelete2.week days→weekday (every+單數)
3.Spent 這句感覺怪怪的, 是要用分詞構句嗎?(但主詞不一樣) 還是祈使句?(但主詞不是''你'') 如果是我,我會寫成:
Spending all days with those funny kids was a very interesting things but also a very tired job to me.
4.invite要記得加s
You do like children, don't you? I also participated in a winter camp for kids form 7 to 10. Though it just lasted for 3 days, the naughty kids really make me exhausted.
關於spent的出現，是我想說參加營隊的事已經結束了，就寫成過去式，但真的不太通順，改成ing比較好~XD
ReplyDeleteActually, if you look at children social behaviors, you will find they are very smart and funny. :目
children's打錯~
Deletegoing out with my families is my favorite things to do =>這樣寫法文法沒錯,但是通常老外很少這樣寫,你要倒過來寫會比較順.
ReplyDeleteI went to be a lecturer => i was a lecturer. 就好了,有點多此一舉
ReplyDelete應該說有點中式英文
DeleteThankyou for your advices!
ReplyDelete^^