Everyone has his ambition, including me. My ambition is to be a
teacher, help all kinds of students to find their happiness. In my childhood, I
saw different kinds of teachers. Some of them were good teachers, but there was
some teachers who only notice children’s studies and ignore students’ morality.
I was one of the students who is not good at studying, however I was lucky and met a very
good teacher who changed me a lot. From then on, I told myself I must be a good
teacher to help all children in this society.
To make my dream come true, the most important step for me now is to
pass an examination. I have to study hard every day at the same time with the practical
training in the elementary school, no matter how tired I will be. After practical
training, I must study hard day and night to pass the examination and can be a teacher.
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Being a teacher, especially an elementary school teacher, is a tough work to me. I think most of the children won't be well-behaved at school, and they will do whatever they want. Therefore, I 'm really impressive to you! As the Nike's advertisement goes, ''Just do it!'' I hope you can reach your goal soon!
Elain, I think the children are lucky who are going to be your students. And I hope you will be achieve your dream.
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